Barbara's+Biodata

===I'm ‍Bárbara ‍ Stéfany Roberto Silva, I'm 23 years old and ‍I ‍live in Belo Horizonte. ‍I'm majoring in English Languange at ‍UFMG ‍‍ and it's my 4th semester. ‍ I'm very interested in ‍working ‍with translation and ‍literature in English ‍‍in the future as a teacher ‍. In 2014 ‍‍I ‍will take part in an ‍exchange program, ‍I'm ‍ not sure about the ‍place yet, maybe London ‍.===

Samara´s sugestion: You should give more informations about what your professional interestes, what do you want of the class and course.

Ana Carolina's suggestion: Bárbara, you could talk more about your academic life, if you already work in the area you study and if you intend to be a teacher or not. I'm Bárbara Stéfany Roberto Silva, I'm 23 years old, i live in Belo Horizonte. I'm Bárbara Stéfany Roberto Silva, I'm 23 yearsold and I live in Belo Horizonte.

Bárbara, I have written a few more comments. Check them, please. Do not use contractions in formal writing, prefer I am to I'm. Once you have finished your corrections, upload an appropriate photo.

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